zombolette ([info]zombolette) wrote,
@ 2008-05-10 00:56:00
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Hello friends,

I've been working on a few pages for Zombolette #3... I'm spending loads more time on the artwork, and still doing lots of silly things but also some different kinds of jokes.

ANYWAYS, I wanted to show you this particular one to see what you think. A few people have said they don't quite get it... it's just meant to be silly, and that really is a theory in astrophysics! For realz! What do you think? Is it worth including in the book? Do you love me? :>



I do want to include it... maybe you have a suggestion for a better way to express it? PLEASE HELP ME LOTS OKAY.

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[info]bsting
2008-05-09 03:38 pm UTC (link)
I get it. I like it.
Actually, I think any answer would've been valid.

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[info]zombolette
2008-05-10 02:00 am UTC (link)
Yes! Exactly the point... thank you Bas :>

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[info]tenshikurai9
2008-05-09 05:11 pm UTC (link)
*snarfs*

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[info]jasonfranks
2008-05-10 01:23 am UTC (link)

I think it's a great gag.

The only way I can think of to improve it might be to have the first part of the question on the other side of the page. So, maybe panel 3 shows the sequence question (from Cam's point of view, like panel 8) and then panel 8 ends with "(continued other side)" instead of "1,2,3, APRICOT."

But really, it works fine the way it is.

"Apricot" is a funny word.

-- JF

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[info]zombolette
2008-05-10 01:59 am UTC (link)
Hehehe the fact that apricot is a funny word was actually the basis of the whole comic :P
I have a simple mind.

Thank you for the suggestion! That probably would make it clearer... I'll see if I can work it into the space, if I'm not too lazy. One of my vices is taht I hate re-doing stuff. :/

<3

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[info]jasonfranks
2008-05-10 03:10 am UTC (link)

Ah, look, you could spend hours rejigging it, but it works fine the way it is. Use those hours to make another funny!

-- JF

PS Heheheheheh, apricot...

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[info]msf_cg_e
2008-05-12 03:39 am UTC (link)
black holes and apricots can never = fail.

good work gorgeous!

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